Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to the issue that the people should take right away the secured job opportunity without waiting for a job that they would be more satisfying in it, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinion. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that. I believe that people should not waste a secured job opportunity because there are so many reasons. This essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the high competitions between the people today make it hard to get a secured job. So, the person must take each job chance that he gets it and try to improve himself in it. Eventually, he makes his cv stronger and increase his chance to get better job in the future. For instance, if the newly graduated student accepts the first job’s offer that he gets, he will utilize his time by learning different skills that he did not learn in school instead of waiting the chance that he looking for.
Another point why I advocate that the people take the guaranty job’s chance that they have immediately because of the hard life. Today the life is very hard and people must do their best to earn money. So, the person should learn how to manage his time and effort in each job that he has to help his family. Additionally, the money which the person earns from his secured job will make his life easier. Eventually, he will be satisfied rather than waiting for the dream job which lead him to different money problems.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that each job has several advantages. In each new job person can gain several advantages for instance he can build nice relationships with people whom may help him to get better job in the future. Additionally, the person cannot see the bright sight of each job without trying it. So, the person must try, work and do his best in each chance he has during his life.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion, which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, as to, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41948279689 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473557692308 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9429236587 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328725708015 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107505269408 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852398179876 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182165396545 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106347876511 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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