Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
On the contemporary era each individuals tend to be aware about events which are happening surroungins them cause these can be helpful information for they personal lives. There is a controversial question regarding this issue, Whether people must gain information from variety of press channels or not? personally, I believe it is not good idea to waste our time on different news sources that will make us more confuse. I have two reasons for my viewpoint, which will be mentioned in the following essay.
To begin with, I concur the fact that we must be well-informed about our circumestance we are living in, but besides that, we have several other crucial facts in our life, our job for instance. wasting precious time on reading various newspapers which indicate same news is not wisdly action. On the other hand, we can choose a valuable and reliable source of news to merely check that specific one. I have a cousin who is addicted to seek new events from numerious websides. His unsuccessful life is a great evidence that indicates he is spending considerable amount of his time, which must be used in other aspects of his life to enhance his lifestyle, on not vital activity.
Secondly, when we found wild range of opinion regarding a phenomenon it makes us confused, not be able to understand which one is true. being hasitate can lead us to be a angry person and it will have great effects on our relationship with our friends and family. my father is used to watching all of the press channels and he complains why they do not have same perspective? which one we should consider? these challange in his mind ruin his relationship with us, he forgets that he have other responsibilities in his life. In my opinion, it is not worthwhile to harm your other aspects of life because of ridiculous news.
To make the long story short, acording to the aforementioned arguments I believe we must choose a valuable source which can informe us about important events which is occured around us. By doing so, we have ability to spend some joyful life with our family and friends since we can focus on it, in addition, we have extra time to fulfill our dreams cause we have limitted time in this world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72797927461 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72235912912 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541450777202 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3349984274 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.352941176 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177987049882 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602972894162 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393368670093 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124421340565 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555026024085 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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