Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
In the recent times, academics have become important for people to be useful and successful in life. Many people thus, propose to be versatile in knowledge for different educational subjects which is of more benefits than depending on a single subject. I agree with the idea of having a wide knowledge in many academics subjects to focus on particular subject. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, ability to have vast range of knowledge in the academics subject will help to gain disparate knowledge in each subjects of study. Indeed, some people are intelligent and they can to retain and make different ideas and information at the same time. Thus, such people can learn different subjects and perform brilliantly. However some don’t have the opportunity which will result for them into failure. Moreover, ability to study different courses in school enhances the brains functionality for the student to be active and smart. My personal experience as an example, when I was in university, I learnt different courses in my department. I went to other department to borrow more courses which helped me to have wide knowledge on different courses and made me to participate in different debates held in my school. This attitude has boosted my brain to be active and always at alert to answer any questions related to any subjects. Therefore, it helps to know more and be versatile in different subjects.
Secondly, when you have wide knowledge in different subjects, it helps in someone's career. Certainly, it is a tremendous act if one should always prepares for future. Nowadays, most companies prefer person who can give and deliver adequate information to their satisfaction. Thus, for her to be able to prep and fit into the current system, she should standout academically and this can be achieved when she has tried to sacrifice by gaining information on different subjects. Apparently, this would have prepared and make you ready for your career work. For example, a school offers employment to my friend because she speaks French, Spanish and Danish languages fluently whereby she is earning a fat salary and this assisted her to quickly become successful than her colleagues that explicitly depend on one subject. Therefore, people that use the best opportunity to learn different academic subject have better future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that having wide knowledge in different subject will help to have different ideas in different subjects and help ones career to flourish than specify on single subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'prepare'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15801886792 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79249964105 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492924528302 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5495354427 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263068333024 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912987329232 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110823135153 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206528236404 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796729127426 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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