Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy
Today, we live in a world where people are struggling to earn more money. No one can deny that money provides luxurious life in each and every way. Most people work in places where they can earn more money even though they do not enjoy their work. However, I prefer to have a job in which I enjoy.
First of all, if we have interest in our work, productivity will increase automatically because we will be able to focus on work throughout the working hours. On the other hand people who work just to make more money and not passionate about their job they can’t perform well and as a result companies would lose their revenue. Best example is customer service jobs. People who really want to help and like to resolve customers issues should join this field. If they just work for money then they will not be able to handle customers' problems calmly and as a result that business will lose their customers.
Furthermore, the outcome of being in a job that we love is that we will wake up relaxed and going to our work will not be terrifying. At work we will finish our task enthusiastically and try to learn tough things if required for our job. We will not mind extending our hours to finish our work task. I think money will follow in any profession, if we do our job with enthusiasm and 100% dedication.
Finally, life is very precious. We should spend it in a way in which we enjoy. If we spend most of our day time working in places where we do not enjoy, it would be very stressful for us. As a result, we will have more health issues and our family life will be disturbed. For example, one of my friends was an engineer and used to work in a company where they were not paying well but work was less stressful. He was enjoying his work , no health issues and his family life was peaceful. On the other hand one of my friends joined a company where they were paying high salaries but workers had to spend long hours and work was very stressful. After a few years of working in that stressful atmosphere he started to have health problems and his family life was also disturbed.
In conclusion, people should work in which they enjoy. They should not work only for money. No one can deny the importance of money because money can provide a luxurious life. However, I think we should work where we have interest and we enjoy it because it is good for health, less family problems and increase productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The Best
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Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45067264574 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36872082581 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423766816143 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6556166681 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.84 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.56 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205923758917 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728262790565 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558600531715 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133219318696 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347948200158 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.