Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The improvement of technology, undoubtedly made many tasks easier to ovecome in life during last decades but there are different opinions upon the question "does the life got more comfortable than before". Some people believed that although we can provide our necessities simpler in modern societies, it will take more effort to gainmoney and nowadays we are most of the time working instead of enjoying our life. but In my point of view we have more comfortable lives comparing to our grandparents lives mainly because of following reasons.
Fisrt of all because, our basic necessities are provided now. In the past, they were always worried if somehing happens to their farms or their products and what would they eat or wear after that. but we do not have to be concerned about these issues anymore because there are many insurances planned to support our lives during unexpected events. we just work to earn money and we can obtain anything we want using that.
Secondly, we work during the week and rest at weekends and holidays. our income gives us the chance to travel and have more fun with or family. but in the past, all the family had to work everyday so as to reach their basic necessities. A woman had to bake bread by herself, cook lunch, do the laundry, wash the dishes and clean the house without using any machines which was too much time-consuming so she were always usy doing these stuff and there were no time to enjoy her life.
To conclude, I believe despite the problems came along with imrovement of societies such as teraffic, air polution and etc, we have better lives now and we should be grateful for that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: necessities
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Suggestion: Our
...week and rest at weekends and holidays. our income gives us the chance to travel an...
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Suggestion: But
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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...st, all the family had to work everyday so as to reach their basic necessities. A woman ...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...d to work everyday so as to reach their basic necessities. A woman had to bake bread by herself, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83566433566 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51905545267 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7425209146 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13409404749 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463170521048 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475791898244 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076597148103 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525327330903 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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