Generation gap
People are living with different generation which are omit over time. There are some effects between old generation and young generation. Some people believe that young and old generation seem to be worlds apart. However, others disagree. In my opinion old people are set in their way and a bit out of touch when it comes to new things like new technology. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, today we live in a fast line and are seeking for new things in our life and developing technology make a great impression on young people which leads them doing different thing toward old one. When children are getting involved with new technology, they will learn new things which makes them distinct from their parents who had never seen that new things and never tended to make such experience which shows the gap between two generations. One of my own experience is a good case in point. I remember when I was child, my parent didn’t know anything about mobile which is kind of cellphone that you can carry it everywhere you want and connected you to everyone in every places. When I was at school, they had always worried about me since they didn’t know where I am. Once I had bought a mobile phone for them and told them we can find each other with this phone in an essential situation every moment, but they had never learnt how to use it and were set in their way. This happen made me upset and had negative point which leads to make a long distance between my parent and me. If our parent had been involving new technology, we wouldn’t have had such generation gap. This example clearly illustrate how technology lead to make generation gap between youth and old people.
Second, developing technology have changed the vision of people during the time. Their life styles are inspired by expansion of technology. By comparison in the past, the new generation are using Internet and have more comfortable life than old generation. However, old ages never tend to live with Internet like new generation. Also, they have always thought that young descents are not in touch with serious problem in the country. For example, I remember once I was doing my bank affair without Internet I went to the actual bank and waited for a long time to do my work. I was waiting for a long time to transfer my money into another account. However, by developing technology and the Internet we could do our bank affair without going directly to the bank. After that I have noticed that life would be more comfortable if we used the technology, this circumstances have been created comfortable situation that had not been in the past but when I shared my experience to my grandparent they had never believed me and maybe they were behind the times.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that old age have been set in their ways and are out of touch into young descent. For two reasons. They are not only using technology to create new vision in their life, but they also are interested into different thing.
Dear sir or madam,
I would like volunteer with your program as a civil engineer to build a house for a poor family in summer. I have already informed myself through the website and find myself very interested in the program; however, I would appreciate if you could give me a feedback regarding the following inquiries.
Your website shows that the project must be finished in six month I would find it a bit difficult to complete the building in spring. Would it be possible to postpone the deadline? Also I would appreciate it if you could send me the dimension of the location that you devote to build it.
In addition, it would be useful if you could send me the details about accommodations.
Thank you very much in advance, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Elahe rezaei
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Generation gap People are living with different generat...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'omitted'.
Suggestion: omitted
...ing with different generation which are omit over time. There are some effects betwe...
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Line 3, column 1126, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...een my parent and me. If our parent had been involving new technology, we wouldn't have h...
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Line 3, column 1309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation gap between youth and old people. Second, developing technology have chang...
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Line 10, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...hat the project must be finished in six month I would find it a bit difficult to comp...
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Line 10, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t be possible to postpone the deadline? Also I would appreciate it if you could send...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 99.0 43.0788530466 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3203.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 685.0 407.700716846 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67591240876 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11590702189 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53407698513 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436496350365 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1005.3 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0808363681 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5142857143 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153096951836 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349301290343 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300324890718 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619805809661 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299132236558 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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