Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People often may debate this argument. I believe that people who try to focus in multiple task at the same time are expose to lose focus capacity.I feel this way for two reason,which i will explore in the following essay

First of all,It is critically important do all the assesstment on the correct and professional way.Now days people are evolved in so many task at the same time.Over the time running like this decrease the attention and energy,so.As the result people start doing just a few of them correctly. A compelling example of this is my onw experince.About two years ago i was as university student. High level studies demanded and extra effort from me.Moreover i trace my self a couple of strategies to fallow,but.Consequenly, at the and of the day i have been exsausted.My score started suffered because i was always tire. One of my teachers at that time notes and suggested changes another easy way to go.I began to concentrated in one task at the time and sucefully graduated from the school many years ago.

Secondly,people need to take in consideration all fisical and mental damage that been super busy cause. Start with,the human body is dising to complete a task one by one.Putting to much stress on it defenily affect the brain response as a whole. For instead, my brother was brilliant as student. He was the president of his career,so.Therefore have not to much time for him,but.Every week he filled ill.After many moth he decide came out of the shell.He ask to my mom for help.They went to the doctor who immediate determined that my brother stress his body. He understand that if we do not rest,eventually we will get sick.At the and he slow down his faster life and concentrated on try to live as healthy as possible.

In summation,in my opinion paying attention in one thing at the time is the best to manage all the duties. Because peolple avoid the illness and encrease their capacity after all taking care their health.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, after all, i feel, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07069807261 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.308306299 48.9658058833 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.5376344086 795% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13058378968 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387830203734 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399824418557 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707966559336 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307825774171 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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