Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At all times teachers were valuable sources of vast knowledge and a great help for those people who wanted to enhance intellectually. Personally, I think that these days, educators are highly appreciated by the society. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, teachers teach children not only science but also how to behave appropriately. This is a pedagogues` duty to correct a child when he acts wrongly, such as when he fights with other students or being rude. In this way, pupils learn from their teachers to be courteous and affable, which is necessary in order to build positive relationships with people. My brother`s experience is a compelling example of this. When he was a teenager, he was naughty and often called his classmates names. Fortunately, his school teacher was an incredibly wise and patient person, and when every time she herd my sibling using inappropriate words, she corrected him right away. Furthermore, she explained to the boy why his way to akt could embarrass other students. In fact, after a while, my brother stopped calling his schoolmates names, which contributed to the development of a friendship between them. That is why I believe that nowadays, the value of a teacher is enormous.
Secondly, a seasoned teacher can help people to rich their life goals. An experienced tutor can detect a learner's weaknesses and help him to eliminate them, or even convert them to strengths. For instance, when I started taking TOEFL test, I kept having low grades in my speaking section. However, when I hired, he told me exactly what I did wrong, such as what kind pronunciation mistakes I constantly made. Moreover, the coach gave me a myriad of tips on how to deal with the anxiety during the test, which also held me back. I took his advice seriously, and the next time, when I set for the test, I was able to get my target score, which was crucial for me since for me, passing the test in one of the steps of becoming a pharmacist in the United States. This example illustrates the importance of a teacher for a modern learner.
To conclude, in my view, the profession of a teacher is indispensable for the contemporary society. This is because they educate children to manners and help people to achieve their aims.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: I_HERD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heard' (past tense of 'hear')?
Suggestion: heard
...patient person, and when every time she herd my sibling using inappropriate words, s...
^^^^
Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'herds'.
Suggestion: herds
...patient person, and when every time she herd my sibling using inappropriate words, s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81424936387 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88291684332 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59796437659 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1172208489 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0952380952 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853116814415 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312764506381 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343730395852 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566032006088 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182194968476 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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