Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that teachers play an important ro in breeding the next generation of any society. In this regard, some people believe that teachers were more valued in the past in comparison todays, while some others hold an opposite oppinion, stating that teachers are more appreciated todays by society. I personally concure with the latter group for tow main reasons, on which I will elaborated in the following paragraphs.
first of all, nowadays, the government alocate more attention to teachers in comparison with the past, resulting in the society value teachers more than past. In fact, in the past, in many countries, such as my country, Iran, teachers recieved a lowest salary relative to their difficult job among other jobs, like nurses and engineers, which it caused that young people did not have any incentive to choose being teacher as future job. Therefore, this job was not be appreciated by sosiety that times. However, todays, the government makes attention to the value of the teachers anf the influence of them in the future of country, increasing their salary and alocate them many previledges. Consequently, the society cherishs teachers and teachers are an acceptable job among people. As a result, the more the government values a job, the more people appreciate that job.
Secondly, todays, the role of teachers in the children's lives is more hilighted than past. In fact, in the today's hectic life, parents do not have enough time to spend helping their children in their school's work, and on the other hand, the student spend alot of their time in school; consequently, the teacher's behavior strongly affects on the children's behavior. As a result, the society give more attention to the importance of the teachers and value them. By doing so, they could indirectly affect their sences and thoughts of their children about teachers. In this respect, in my country, there are a week in one year to appreciate the teachers, so-called '"teacher week". In this week, children and their parents appreciate teachers and give them a present.
to conclude, todays the teacher are more valued than the past, partly because the government dedicate attention and consideration about teachers, modifing the view of society about teachers, and because children spend most of their time in school and teachers play an impartant role in their lives.
- TPO 53 Task 2 3
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14652956298 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67512311154 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467866323907 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6991622694 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244471010948 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983822345565 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746573604473 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155815647001 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316625023175 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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