Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

A glance at people's attitude toward their influence on the society brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether they can influence future of society or not. As an educated member of the American society, I believe that people have equal opportunity to participate in decisions making process of U.S.A. Although some of my friends think that politics does not allow us to speak up our voice, I repute this statement.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that in the past people could not oppose the king and queen, so it was nearly impossible to talk about their opinions. In contrast, democracy allows people to tell the government what they think and what they want via voting system. All people in a country has the right to choose their president, representatives, and senators. On the other hand, every body can report corruption without punishment. Thus, our decisions have direct impact on the future of society.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that virtual applications such as Instagram, Twitter, and facebook, provide us a great opportunity to make the comments on different subjects. For example, president Trump banned all travels to America from seven specific countries, which most people showed their objection on Twitter. After one month, supreme court supported people and Donald Trump finally had to change the travel ban. This example clearly illustrate the effect of social media and people opinions. No government can stay in his position without people acceptance. Therefore, each individual has the power to make decisions about society.
Nevertheless, my colleagues assert that ordinary people do not have professional knowledge about important fields such as economy. As a matter of fact, we should not allow uneducated individuals to decide about our country because it has bad effect on the overall condition. However, I declare that the first sign of a developed country is having knowledgeable people. So, we must try to educate others to make the correct decision and prevent politicians from breaking rules. The more a country has wise people, the more it is legitimate. Therefore, this concern even if is important, we should solve it instead of eliminating.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous discussion, I highly recommend people to believe in themselves and their opinions. We build our country not only with our hard work, but also with right votes.

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Average: 8.3 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14742014742 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.765999912 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597051597052 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.671428352 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7619047619 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180691231429 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473105694333 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393522984829 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948484675877 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323029664319 0.0645574589148 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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