Do you agree or disagree: the high school students are required to study many different subjects at the same time or they should only study three or four subjects at a time?

There are myriad factor or consideration which take in that, students of high school need to study either three to four subjects either many subjects. As far as I concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that high school student required many different subjects for study. Someone can consciously weigh pros and cons of each side. The reason will be explored in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherence to my viewpoint with experience, the high school students need to study more the three to four subjects at a time because high school is only the beginning student needs to know knowledge about every subject so they can easily find out which subject they are good in which they are going to make future furthermore my example is best for this as when I was in the tenth class we have six regular subject and one optional subject that gives me lots of options which subject I need to go with my future and the best part is I go with the opitional subject which is computere which gentrate my love for programing and know I am computere scinces enginner.
Apart from the fact mention above, one should regard consider another sublet point meticulously pertaining to optioning with huge experiences. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by recent a social research conducted in my country in which majority of people agree with if students have more options in high school there chance to become successful is much higher as they have preview knowledge about the subject and they select the right one, to shed more light on this topic according to the Delhi University study if student get more option in their high school they become very good in mentaing all subject at once so after that which gives them help in schedule manages as they studyed more subject at onces in preveious classes.
Admittedly, someone can justification another side that study a lot of subjects together can put the burden on the student and there is less subject student have more time for other activities and play games, as in future high schools only core subjects matter but I still affirmed that more subject at time can be more helpful for student.
In summary, by all the aforementioned above high school students required to study more different subjects at the same time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ction that high school student required many different subjects for study. Someone can conscio...
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Line 2, column 665, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ich gentrate my love for programing and know I am computere scinces enginner. Apart...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, apart from, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87654320988 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55174165219 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.693135709 48.9658058833 463% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.444444444 100.406767564 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.6045352989 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445484222701 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196535416519 0.076458572812 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154016864304 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307583198384 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091772763537 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 11.7677419355 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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