There is well-aknowledged that our society is always keeping going and making remarkable progress, such as the Industrial Revolution and the Information Revolution. Due to the contribution to facilitating human beings' daily life, some people hold the viewpoint that progress is always good and positive. Contrary to their opinions is my perspective that progress may have some negative impact under some circumstances.
Among all explicit negative influence of progress in modern society, the most serious one is the air pollution caused by overusing automobiles, which released a huge amount of emissions and exhaust into our atmosphere. Automobiles, serving as an efficient method of transportation, definitely facilitate people's daily life remarkably, like distracting people from the hassle of long-distance journey. However, exhaust generated by cars largely harms environment, with the polluted air being devastating to human and environmental health. For example, virtually all of the modern and metropolitan cities in China suffer from severe smog, resulted from poisonous particles in emissions from traffic, in the winter recently, when the sky is dark and invisiable and citizens cannot go out without wearing well-equipped masks. In this case, residents' life quality is affected sigificantly.
Another primary bad impact of progress lies in the food cultivation. Undoubtedly, pesticides and fertilizer are boost and improve the harvest of farmers, greatly contributing to their increasing income. Nevertheless, some farmers abuse these progress, giving rise to the fact excessive remains of chemicals on plants are consumed by people. Consequently, the health of people is exposed to remarkable threat. For instance, a farmer in South China once overused pesticides and the crops were brought by the local authority. The officials fell ill after eating the food and went to the hospital for several days. Even though the farmer was punished, the harm to the officials could be recovered.
Admittedly, progress does have its merits. For example, with the introduction of technology to the education field, students are the prime beneficiaries, for the reason that they can have access to high-quality education resources.
To summarize, although progress mainly has positive effect, it sometimes may cause some problems and issues, like air pollution and food pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73595505618 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1245199101 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63202247191 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4626399982 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769267751377 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250606379709 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340436529237 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457463387558 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404528081976 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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