Do you agree or disagree? For students who are planning to work in business , learning about psychology is more important than learning about technology.
In my view, students planning to work in business should give more importance to learning technology than learning psychology. businessmen have to deal with many people. So knowing how people react or what they desire would be beneficial to the business to flourish and improve. In the present world, technology controls all these aspects of businesses. technology also helps in the growth and expansion of the business.
In today's world, it is essintial for students to know technology before they attempt into any business. this will help them in understanding the needs and trends of the current generation. also, it will help them in improving their business and become successful. For example, a person who knows technology will definitely launch an online website of his business along with the real business. Nowadays, more and more people are shopping online and hence having an online website will definitely be helpful to his business and will also support him in doing better business and thereby being successful.
Furthermore, technology will help the businessmen in knowing customer feedback on their product. this customer feedback can be used to bring changes or improvements in their current product and make their commodity more satisfying. For instance, today, feedback of each product will be posted on social media and most people read these reviews about the goods before purchasing it. If the businessman comprehends how to use technology? and how to use these social media to know about customer feedback? he could definitely bring modifications and innovations to the product based on these reviews, even though he doesn't know people psychology. hence, it is quintessential to know technology in the modern world.
In conclusion, in the last generation, psychology might have been an important aspect of a business. However, presently, technology is the key factor. technology is essential not just for day-to-day activities, but also to achieve growth and being successful in business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39432176656 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90592958503 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1378561959 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170541389281 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483169904497 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851393279938 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104508795667 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597415812815 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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