Do you agree or disagree?
Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where people are more involved in their daily life that it could hardly be believed, people have to use their time efficiently. It is also important to enjoy our free time. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this concept is which one of reading fiction or watching movies is more enjoyable for people. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that watching movies is more enjoyable than reading fiction books while others look at this concept through a different lens. From my vantage point, reading fiction is more delightful than watching movies. In following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that books provide more detail than movies. Movies, because of time limitation, omit some details or narrate the short version of original story. On the other hand, books contribute with more information and details as long as the author wants. In this regard, an individual can imagine the whole story, characters and scenes instead of just watching them in movie. Hence, different people may hold different aspect of view. Sharing our view point about fiction books, is one of my favorite topic to talk with my friends. Since I a write, these debates sometimes give a great inspiration to apply in my own stories. This is my deep belief that, due to more detail in books, it leads to be more creative and improve our imagination.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reason available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind that books are more accessible than movies. Nowadays, thanks to high technology, almost all books have E-version beside printed-version. Therefore, people can continue reading more or less every where. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a social research conducted in our country, show that more than 63 percent of people prefer to read books when they are using public transportation. Furthermore, you can read a book any time you want. For instance, I always read a short story before going to sleep. In brief, there is always a book ready for your enjoyment.
To make a long story short, you can read books at any time and any place to improve your creativity and imagination. If one weights the merits and demerits of the above statements, one soon realizes that reading fiction books are more enjoyable than watching movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, in brief, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03529411765 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68722364798 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548235294118 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2458853213 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7083333333 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317871939796 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904060594825 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837649097503 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217919280701 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073496259521 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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