Do you agree or not?
Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well.
Undoubtedly the modernization of societies has a widespread effect in various aspects of human life. People are obliged to do so many different tasks which in many cases they don’t have any pertinence. Therefore, people lose their efficiency and they may accomplish few numbers of works successfully.
To begin with, concentration is of great importance in the humans abilities. As a matter of fact, human mind needs to get focused on a single topic to show its high performance. This is a common belief among scientists that in order to do things well, people need to pay the utmost attention to what they are doing, whether intellectual task or manual works. Although many subscribe to the idea that people enjoy multi-task minds, I still think that if it’s true, they would encounter a dramatic decrease in their functionality. It’s more highlighted when it comes to heavy tasks like professional sports or high level studying.
Furthermore, many tasks are in conflict with one another. In fact some jobs use different parts of the brain, therefore it’s a shortcoming of the human brain that has parts which are in contrast in their operation. According to the researches of the scientists, the left lobe of the brain has the duty to perform mathematics, while the left lobe is involved in the arts and aesthetic aspects. Therefore given the fact that people are mostly left brained or right brained, it doesn’t seem reasonable that people can be good at both related activities. For instance, people who are talented artists, are not necessarily an erudite person who is gifted in logical thoughts. Although it’s a part of the human nature that he or she can foster his or her skills with practice, it’s unlikely to consider the improvements to the extend that he/she become perfect in both.
Finally, most of people have limited capacity of learning, except the ingenious or famous people like Newton. This is a fact that people will not grow much in term of their IQ or talents over their lifetime. As a result, it’s a commonly accepted notion that people should choose their favorable activities wisely because of this issue. Resourceful people use their minds capacity more that ordinary people which allows them to get involved in a wider variety of activities.
To put in a nutshell, the governing circumstances which compel people to do a large spectrum of works, is a discord between people’s abilities and the requirements. knowing the fact that every person is appropriate for a specific job, would solve this controversial problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...human life. People are obliged to do so many different tasks which in many cases they don&apos...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lved in the arts and aesthetic aspects. Therefore given the fact that people are mostly l...
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Line 3, column 838, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nlikely to consider the improvements to the extend that he/she become perfect in both. F...
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Line 3, column 842, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ely to consider the improvements to the extend that he/she become perfect in both. F...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
.../she become perfect in both. Finally, most of people have limited capacity of learning, exce...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Knowing
...'s abilities and the requirements. knowing the fact that every person is appropria...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10823529412 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89608350259 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569411764706 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5997409318 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193430008038 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564037459761 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733703932401 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122318359782 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068383644834 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.