Essay topics: Essay topics: TPO45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, the whole world has been changing astronomically at the speed of light with the advent of novel innovations and concepts. Hence, people have been forced to adapt their lifestyles and learn how to stand on their own. A controversial debate, though, which is often raised with respect to the ethos of this issue is whether these situations lead young people to be much more independent than they used to be. Ergo, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up the current conditions in comparison to the previous era, I firmly hold the idea that the young generation gained recognition in every society as a result of their great extent efforts which encourage them to have their rules and regulations to make their dreams true for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the prime reason why I am of such a belief is that the lowest level of knowledge in the past vis-à-vis the highest level in today's world. As a matter of fact, available information is another contributor to the fact of independence, moreover, the majority of the young generation have access to up-to-date information through a computer database_thanks to the miracle of the world wide web_which causes youth to be fully aware of the outcomes and side effects of their decisions. The social media network, Facebook as a case in point, lets people share their experience of doing everything.
By the same token, another paramount reason that must be cataloged here is that the right of having privacy and freedom for young people are considered by their parents when they want to make decisions for their futures, while previously these decisions were taken based on rigid social hierarchies. in other words, under those exhausting circumstances, young generations choices were restricted on social discriminatory taboos.
Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that getting involved for parents in determinations of their children's intentions was used to be epidemic and inevitable. Owing to that children spent their lifespans near their parents, thus, they did not have enough experience of being independent. Apart from the fact that children are the cornerstone of every successful society, teaching young people to be responsible paves the way for them to handle hardships as well.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I definitely agree with the initial statement and as a liberal person believe that there is not a vestige of interference in youth purposes. To sum up, having discussed the rationales, I am of the opinion that being free in choices a double-edged sword but it brings about a harbinger of far better times to come for the next generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to sum up, with respect to, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06473214286 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91372543634 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9154966929 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.071428571 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 5.45110844103 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282844165835 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887411852429 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559472742919 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145890150928 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573836907105 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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