Food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improve the way people live?
Our eating habits have undergone a paradigm shift in the last decades owing to the hectic city life that most people lead. Although people are unanimous that there has been a change in this regard and they care more about what they eat, whether this shift has been for the better or not is still moot point. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that despite the developments in science and improvements of hygienic conditions in preparing food, the food we eat today is by far less healthy compared to the past. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that human beings bend over backwards to lead a healthy lifestyle. Indeed, in today's hectic world many diseases have penetrated every single facet of our lives, which prevent us from having a healthy lives. Generally phrased, the food people eat play a significant role in individual's way of living and can bring deleterious effects on the health of people. As a matter of fact, nowadays a plethora of people rely on fast food and pre-prepared meals which contain too much salt, fat, sugar and other ingredients that are not healthy for body. As far as I am concerned, people in past time provided with homemade food and nourishing meals and that is why those people lived longer than today's people. To elucidate more on this issue, an unhealthy food can bring different diseases such as obesity, heart diseases and so forth. In this case, the way people live will definitely change and their lifestyle can not only improve but also can put people's health into serious danger. As a tangible example, researches have shown that majorities of people who do not care about their healthy meals suffer from overweight and many other problems. In fact, this trend has increased among people especially youth.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that in today's hectic city people spend less time with their family. To put it in general word, gone those days that people gather and cooperate in making food. As a matter of fact, in such case, people were provided a precious moment to address problems of other members and got informed of many things that happen to them. Going into the depth, fast food and prepared meals have separated people and have created a situation, which people forget that there is a foundation called family. However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, many people are willing to consume healthier food with full of nutrition and nowadays people are provide with these meals rather than past days. Also, owing to the fact that today's different food could become ready as soon as possible, not only can people spend more time with their family and improve their social relation but also can allocate more time to their personal works. Nonetheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
In light of the reasons elaborated, I reiterate that the food we eat has influenced our way of living and has changed it significantly. Actually, pre-prepared meals have deleterious effects on our health and cause many diseases such as obesity, heart diseases and so on. In addition, because food is easy to prepare, crowds of people do not spend their precious time with family due to the fact that making food will provide an opportunity for people to gather and get informed of many things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
... which prevent us from having a healthy lives. Generally phrased, the food people eat...
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...dy. As far as I am concerned, people in past time provided with homemade food and nourish...
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Line 7, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gather and get informed of many things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, as a matter of fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2937.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 602.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted
Chars per words: 4.87873754153 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4516679895 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478405315615 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 918.9 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2628399662 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311477486367 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874002179767 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752748940284 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199283878309 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429696440991 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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