Future plans

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Future plans

Planing the future is one of the pleasant issues to have a deal with. I intend to do several significant steps which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I prefer to continue my study while I have a chance. I majored in architecture and found out the level I have leave a lot to desired. For instance, the employer of mine had fired me due to lakc of knowledge.
Secondly, I aim to find my own style of painting. Art is the second field of my interests. Furthermore, I dream that one day drawing illustrations for fashion magazines would replace my work in an architecture studio. The target have been unrealized earlier because there was no time for this unfortunately. However, my schedule is developed and have included morning drawing activity.

Thirdly, I hope to get married. My future husband is doing everything for it. I just guess my wedding are coming soon. That is why one of goal to become a loyal, good, thoughtful, brave and loving wife.

To sum it up, my core object are focused on getting education, developing hoodie and creating a new pease of society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pea'?
Suggestion: pea
...n, developing hoodie and creating a new pease of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65979381443 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.805222647 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6152838297 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2666666667 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9333333333 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0530288373737 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208180500176 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531148942412 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351687765249 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435976378887 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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