High-paying job vs. low-paying one?
Each year, many students graduated from school and are seeking a job. So far I can tell, most of them are so enthusiastic to find a job and enhance their careers prospect. Some people show great interest in the high-pay job, while others are more willing to working for the low-paying job. No doubt that every individual has his own opinion about the advantages and disadvantages when it comes to comparing the low-paying job and the high-paying job one; for me, I think, the advantages of the high-paying job outweigh disadvantages of the low-paying job so my choice is definitely the high-paying job.
Now let’s use the popular analyzing method named “SWOT Analysis”, which commonly used in the field of economics and management science in order to decision making. Here, S stands for “strengths”, W for “weakness”, o for “opportunities” and T for “target”. This method acts as a scale and measures weigh of weakness compare with advantages include strengths and opportunities.
1. The high-paying job offers many advantages that are helpful to supplying my expenses such as tuition fee, transportation fares, costs of clothes, and other daily needs. The high-paying job and affluent me to go to Cinema, Football Stadium, and other entertainments. In short, the low-pay job will deprive me of many things that money could buy.
2. Besides, in our world high-paying job brings many characteristics such as prestige, attraction, good-manner, lively and even personality. I think most of the life’s tensions are stem from money and can be seeping away by money. The people do not have the desire to evaluate and think about our lives and they think what they see.
3. Finally, in the high-paying job, you will obtain more opportunities such as bringing the child up with better utilities and sending them to non-profit school. Meanwhile, people with higher income can live in a more silent area of the city and enjoy their life. Sometimes everything seems like a double-edged sword when speaking the strengths and weakness. In the high-paying job, there might be little time to spend with my friends and family, but compared with the strengths and the opportunities mentioned above, it can be ignored.
Nonetheless, when the target is overriding factor, you, as a high-paid worker will be more likely to fulfill your target because of the strength of money to come over many problems.
All that I have said above boils down to the conclusion that if you have a choice to opt for the high-paying job or low-pay job you should choose the high-pay job for its ability to make you affluent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, nonetheless, so, thus, while, i think, in short, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11520737327 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33222425574 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8855676888 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.842105263 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456377573381 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150272452107 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173930373308 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235925655226 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197569065733 0.0645574589148 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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