How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention of television and movies for entertainment purposes, we all aware that it had a great impact on people for there are positive impacts and other negative impacts. There are different types of people some learn positive things and some learning negative things. While I think there are negative impacts is more.
Firstly, television or movies are impacted such as people’s mentality goes like whatever they can saw on television or movies that can happen in a real-life, this thing is impacted negatively on people. Also, some of them will try to do exactly what they saw on television. Also, people spending their most of time watching television or movie and because of that their social life will get unbalanced. Television or movies impacted badly on children when they watch crime series and horror films, children create their imagination and effect on their mental health.
Sometimes movies and television program show irrelevant content which affects on society, for example, there are some social crises in one part on the state which affects on another side of the state because of some false news. Also sometimes television shows some incomplete content which creates confusion in people and then they make a biased decision.
Secondly, sometimes television or movies are having a good influence on people for example; movies on patriotism which inspired people and produce interest to work for their country. Also, the news channel which is gives some useful information. Television and movies are also impacted by those people who want to make their careers into the artistic field. People get important information through the television, for example, weather forecast report, also the news about political movements.
In conclusion, movies and television influence people’s behavior negatively and positively, also creates confusion in society and distracts people from their social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ings and some learning negative things. While I think there are negative impacts is m...
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...f the state because of some false news. Also sometimes television shows some incompl...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42524916944 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217462244 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7127371046 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221914409481 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876601568221 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661501831064 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144775422338 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675699067738 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.