If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

If I were an employer, I would definitely hire an inexperienced worker.
First, I would provide my worker a high background level of experience. Then, he would be able to work in different sectors of the company being under paied. Therefore, it would be possible to hire more workers to fill out the gaps of the company.
Second, hiring the worker would deplete the company costs. For instance, I remember when I started working for a company and there were many high intellectual workers in it. The company was almost going to bankruptcy due to the large number of workers whose salary overcame the profits made by the company. Therefore, it began to fire many workers and I was taught their experiences to accomplish the companies' tasks.
However, hiring an experienced worker could be very profitable for the company. For example, instead of teaching others to develop programs to solve all the companies's issues, only one high qualified worker would be enough to divice a program to hash out the task. Besides, such worker could be able to create the program without mistakes, as an example free of virus.
Finally, hiring an inexperienced worker is the best way to make the ends meetr in a company. Furthermore, as the worker works he acquires enough knowledge to realize many tasks in it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8778280543 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69191601394 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3108106555 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317289301473 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142443076999 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111621119557 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229473495556 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125561138852 0.0645574589148 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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