internet
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of using the internet around the world. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree that the use of internet world wild has positive effect on our daily life. It is my firm belief that no one can live without internet these days for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, internet helped us to work from home, the employee can talk and see each other and even screen sharing witch is the most useful in these days. And I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been deeply influenced by my own experience. You see, this year for example we had to stay at home for several months, luckily I had the chance to work from my home. As a result, I was able to spend more time with my family and focus more on my personal life. For this reason, I strongly believe that the internet has positive impact on us especially what happened this year showed us the importance of the internet.
Secondly, internet is a great platform to search for any kind of information, which is helpful for students to complete home works or even researches. Drawing from my own experience, my thesis was about rare subject, so I had to rely on online resources. Moreover, it was acceptable by my collage because all the resources were reliable. That is how rich the internet with information had helped through my university.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet has a positive impact on us in several ways. This is because it gave us the opportunity to work from home, and expand our resources field.
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| 2023-07-21 | Take | 70 | view |
| 2023-06-08 | Vivian Chang | 70 | view |
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| 2023-06-02 | Atharva_Bhide1808 | 80 | view |
| 2023-05-27 | danielkim736 | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation had helped through my university. In conclusion, I strongly believe that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54391891892 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51078526374 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3824947806 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27581998934 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117318305866 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108214539178 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189802693839 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047022910131 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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