Movie is one of most significant inventions in the 19th Century. This kind of art is not only entertaining viewers bu also enligtening them. During the 200 years development, the movie is becoming so popular that it records the steps of human civilization and innovation. I will address my views of movie popularity among people as follows.
To begin with, people like to watch movie because they can get lots of fun in it. In the development of movies, the comedy movie is the one attracted people in different age. There are so many amusement in the plot of the movie. From Charlie Choplin to Jimmy Parsons, all these comedy masters contributed themselves to the enterprise of comedy in order to amuse viewers. In return, their names are remembered by people,because they brought the joyful moment to the viewers. Even in the movies of Choplin, there were no word in them, I still laughed a lot when I saw the funny gesture of him. These happy memory has been in my mind for years, every time I recalled Choplin, the funny plots were still in my mind.
In addtion, The movies enlighten the viewers. There are lots of movies has deep meaning in them. Especcially in some life-struggling movies, the scenes of the heroes fighting for lives are encouraging. After I saw the movie Shawshanks' redemption, I was inpired by the heroes' effort to struggle for unfair life. Also, the spirit of neve give up in the hero is very enlightening. It taught me that wheneve how hard the life is , you should keep faith to work hard , then conquor the difficulty in life by yourself. Just like the end of the movies, when the hero escaped the prison form the tunnel, his embrace to the heavy rain is the most inspiring moment of the movie. It also inspres me in life.
Finally, someone may hold the view that the reason why the movies are very popular among people because of the business running of the movies like Hollywood major producers. In my opinion I can not deny this point as there are great efforts of these business movei producers. And their prodcuctions of the movies like the Spiderman or the Avengers are very popluar in the world. THe sucessful running of the business did bring more benefits to the companies. While if we wathc thees movies, theris themes are still about love, resposiblility or faith. These spirits and endeavors are also encouraging people especially the youth.
In all, as my concern, the movie as the great invetion after the modification of the steam machines, is so popular around the world. This popularity will continue because the movie bring the virtue of human beings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many amusements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, while, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74669603524 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60709276975 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517621145374 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5300012692 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8148148148 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8148148148 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245824652372 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673778359809 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784185866118 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162431727537 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862199585165 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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