Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Our neighbors are very important of our life. we spend a lot of our time with neighbors who live near us that they affect on our life. Some people believe qualities of neighbors are very important. Others disagree. In my view, personality and level of education of neighbors are important qualities of individuals.
First, individuals in a neighborhod should be calm personality. when a person has good personality, he can be beneficial for his society. For example, when I live in Azna, I and my family were bothering a lot by our neighbor. after 6 months, we decided to move out this neighborhod where I had very memories. my father could find one appartment where a lot of dignitries live there. First night, when we move in this place, all our new neighbors came to help us. they were very nice and tried to be friendly with us. I could sleep easy after months. As you can see, people who live in our neighborhood are important role.
Second, people must have high level of education. If one person have education, she can asset to all her neighbors like creating a lot of jobs. For instance, when I live in Tehran, my neighbor was famous doctor who contribute to all poor family. one of weakness in our neighorhood was shortage work for young people who graduated high level university. Fortunately, famous doctor decided to initiate a company to increase level of life of young people which they had motivation. As he got my resume, he became very excited because I had management degree and he give me good job. after then, I could progress in my life and my neighborhood became probe of industry in town. this taught me, I would be more conscouis to choise my neighbor.
qualities of neighbors are qualities of good neighbors. Not only are they beneficial for our society, but also they are worth. we should find good person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69659442724 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72901743484 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8847909012 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.2083333333 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4583333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216034026727 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704947336157 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709830948814 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158860232205 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487271152977 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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