Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Our lives are certainly affected by the people we are surrounded with and I strongly believe having neighbors who are supportive is most important for happy, peaceful and calm life. The most outstanding points of having a supportive neighbor are developed in later paragraphs.
First of all, our lives shall be smooth and calm if we have a supportive neighbor who encourages us in difficult times. Not everyone will be able to discuss their life problems with relatives and their beloved ones. Supportive neighbors share our views, encourage in times of need and are approachable. For instance, I vividly remember, when I was in ninth grade my mother had the plan of opening a boutique. But she lacked any encouragement and support. At that time, aunt who is our neighbor motivated her to be independent and work for her dream. Even today my mother is thankful to the support she received from her. A supportive neighbor is like a relative, the kinship we have with our siblings can be experienced with supportive neighbor. One can be able to interact with ease and the interaction we have with our neighbors actually determines our daily lives. For instance, imagine your day starting with the complaints of your neighbor, it actually frustrates and spoils our daily lives.
Secondly, community problems are common in these days. So, if we have a neighbor who is supportive we shall be able to face the any-kind of untoward situations with courage and strength. For instance, my friend used to live with his grandparents in a community where a bunch of youngsters who had political background, used to create nuisance every night. Those youngsters even with repeated complaints never changed their behavior, so his grandparents took this problem to the neighbor and with the help of them ousted the youngsters out of the place one day. My point here is, that neighbor had the option to be apathetic to the problem, instead he chose to be supportive and helped them.
To wrap up, I reiterate that having a supportive neighbor is most important than the neighbor who is quiet and who have similar tastes for the afore-mentioned reasons. Not only does a supportive neighbor help in times of need but the way they behave has profound impact on our daily lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91906005222 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80533449496 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506527415144 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5956344964 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228000162913 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841602269587 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835178637072 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178045778026 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419000080487 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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