Our life is much easier than our parents life.agree or disagree
All the development and the technology used Nowadays have many advantages and disadvantages in many aspects of life. But their positive consequences more than their negatives. Personally, I think that nowadays is much easier than our parents days because this huge development facilitates many works on us by reducing the time and effort for the following reasons that I will explore in this essay.
First of all, the technology created many types of equipment and house tools that helped to achieve all the house chores in an easy way without any effort from us.also it reduces the time consumed many chores like the cleaning and washing, so this gives more opportunities for the parent to spend more time raising their children and in working outside home,so in other words it increases the leisure time in life. For example, our parents were losing their time in washing dished and plates also in cleaning clothes, this process was taking nearly one day to complete besides the large efforts. While nowadays, there are washing and cleaning machine that automatically do all these steps without any aid, we need just one hour to complete the last step just in turning the machine on and off.
In addition to that, the technology used in transportation now helped to shorten the distances and to join the far with the near locations, so it makes the world as a small country. Now there are many cars and public buses you can use to move where you want, available in many time and places within the same region as well as their cost is not too high like the past days, so you can buy one in cheap price. While in our parents days, it was so hard to find good transportation, also it was so expensive to ride public transportation or to get a car. For example, my father was taking 2 hours to reach to his university with high price by the public transportation,but now I am studying in the same place it takes from me nearly 20 minutes in my own cars with the half cost.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology ease the life for us by making it more comfortable.because the technology used in house tools and the transportation and cars reduced the time and effort consumed.this also tend to increase the happiness in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... helped to achieve all the house chores in an easy way without any effort from us.also it redu...
Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...eir children and in working outside home,so in other words it increases the leisure...
Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... high price by the public transportation,but now I am studying in the same place it ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69465648855 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75625730556 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6775157439 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.727272727 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7272727273 20.6045352989 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149229157181 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599029742425 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566196664393 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107169141973 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655524585018 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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