People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no denial to the fact that a college experience leads to a holistic development of an individual which eventually helps him in later stages of life. I am sure that different people attend college with different objectives. However, if I were to substantiate reasons behind attending college, I would choose personal development, formal degree and increased job opportunities. These points are briefly explained in the following paragraphs.
To start with, attending college is of utmost importance to get accustomed with the outer world. In other words, a university environment provides an immense amount of exposure to individuals which help them carve their personalities. In an university, we get to interact with people from different backgrounds, cultures and even countires. Engaging in productive discussions with them leads to an expansion of our horizon which furhter helps us develop a wide spectrum of ideas. Seminars, presentations and group assignments arranged in colleges are most essential in building a broad mindset and serves as a breeding ground of monumental ideas. From my personal experience, I must say that atending a college has helped to become a better human being and perceive life in a more optimistic way.
Secondly, although quite implicative, a college provides a formal degree which is an universally accepted piece of information revealing our credentials. However obvious it may sound, a college degree opens several pathways for development in our career. As the world becomes more and more specialized across all disciplines, only a structured institution like a college or an university can help in learning skills, and obtaining a degree which are may otherwise be difficult. For example, I have always been a data science enthusiast and wanted to build a career out of it. It is a well know fact that in recent times a lot of courses and workshops on data science are available on the internet. However, such informations are hughely scattered. Only a college degree can prepare an individual as a proper data scientist by providing a structured coursework and attest his credentials through a degree certificate.
Finally, I would like to mention about the increased job opportunities that arise after passing out of college. These days, most colleges have a highly efficient placement cell which deals with companies and help their students get placed. As a matter of fact, most students are priviledged with job offers even before they actually graduate. Drawing from my own experience, I would say that my colleg has helped me commendably by assisting me to secure a job and get place.
In the light of the above mentioned points, it is clear why attending a college has multiple benefits for an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, of course, as a matter of fact, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23595505618 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06967772711 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559550561798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.220245814 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203811428546 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596902376459 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575374652357 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126839743285 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554621093737 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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