People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

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People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

having a job for some people is mainly related to obtaining the money to subsidize to all essential needs. Others believe that working provides additional profits such as goals and development.

The first example is goals. As we are doing our tasks we often face new problems that require efficient and effective solutions. This means that new achievements are set. Taking as a way of illustration scientists, their desires are far from being related to money. they work as hard as possible to solve problems and find solutions that will help people in their daily lives or for future explorations and finding. Each theory in itself has a variety of asssumptions that have to be proved thus jobs are interesting.

Secondly, development is another profit. Employees get to improve their knowledge. Their performance becomes more efficient due to the experiences they thrive. Furthermore, the appearance of new problems makes them sharpen their way of thinking and increase their capacity t find a valuable solution with low costs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22754491018 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8452629987 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1462603766 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137420183846 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443752568592 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530953875778 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983296227934 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562256186013 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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