People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Billions of people wake up early in the morning every day in order to work. A job is a nice opportunity to get a salary and so to pay the cost of living. Although, money is not the only reason that people work. Sometimes individuals work because they want to feel useful in their society and to communicate with the colleagues.
First of all, everyone wants to contribute something to the place where he lives and often he can do it by his job. people are social creatures, who feel very happy when they help their team and feel that they have an important role in it. For instance, a teacher who learns children to read. she knows that with her job, she offers a great value to the society that is even more important than money. this feeling to help others gives great motivation to individuals. Imagine doctors, they often spend more than 20 hours per day to make a surgery because they want to save their patient. it is difficult to achieve this motivation with money.
Second, many people prefer to work than to retire as they love to communicate with their colleagues. The working environment is a great place for discussing with other people. Usually, fellows have many commons experience so it is easy for them to speak about a topic. this communication is essential for welfare of a person. For example, my father when he used to work he was very happy as he has a lot of friends in his job, but after retirement, he got depression as he misses a lot of this communication. Moreover, in the office is the best place to learn the news as during coffee breaks you can discuss many other things that are not related to the job. so a person at work can broaden his knowledge in this way.
To sum up, people do not work only for money. There are other important motivators as the feeling to be useful and communication in the workplace. I believe a person who enjoys his job he is more productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59598853868 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54588034282 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507163323782 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2157586865 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.380952381 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234674984806 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795694261204 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076414123858 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173698144237 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557934626704 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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