Pets should be treated like family members.

Some people keep pets as a friend to play with their children, some people prefer pets like a security guard, in short, different people have distinctive attitudes toward pets. Obviously, as people vary, theor thoughts also vary. Although some people believe that pets should be treated as a family member, others think that pets should not be a part of family. As far as I am concerned, I can agree with the first statement which states tha pets should be treated as family members. There are a few reasons for my choice. I have explored my opinion in the following lines.

Firstly, pets are like our partner or one of our family member. They should be treated like our children. Many people keep dogs, cats, etc to play with their children. Also, some people prefer dogs as their partner for morning walk. To enhance their activeness, people should allow to indulge in their activities as treated like as a family member. For example, generally, dogs get bored by using a particular type of toy in single month. In short, they do not enjoy with this toy anymore. Therefore, people should provide different toy as they provide their children. It also increases their closeness with their pets.

Furthermore, many people keep pets, mostly dog, as supervisor or security guard for their houses. So, to boost their quality and effectiveness to perform their regular task, pets should be treated as a family member. Moreover, people should provide love and affection. Pets should be provided regular supply of nutritional food, in order enhance their efficiency. For example, if pets do not have regular supplement of food resource or incomplete food, do you think they act actively? Clearly, not. They should be treated as their young children.

However, it is not always possible to comport with pets as family member. Some situations are not relevant and suitable to behave with them as a family sharer. For example, my neighborhood family has a dog. They furnish him regular food, love, affection, and much more. But when they go to party or wedding or any other social movements, they avoid with it as an accompany. They tie it to its house and dog keeps barking and crying until their return. Obviously, we cannot take him as an accompany as our child since it has different world while human beings as different world.

In summary, as we can view from the above opinion that we have to treat pets just like our one of the family member. Although it is not possible always to keep it as an accompany in situations like party or wedding, ,such situations are not on daily basis. In addition, we should behave with our pets as our child by providing it regular needs.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in short, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81561822126 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45606602951 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455531453362 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0031330017 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6129032258 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8709677419 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22580645161 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394347682042 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111266385903 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136886769126 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250297307139 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101153768855 0.0645574589148 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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