Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In many societies, giving feedbacks to a person elder than you, is considered unethical. having growing in such societies students fail to evaluate their teachers. However, the evaluation of teacher by a student is something crucial because it allows the teacher to know areas where he or she can improve, creates a good teacher-students relationship, and maximized the students performance.
Firstly, evaluation from students can help the teacher to improve his effectiveness in teaching. students are the best people who can evaluate teacher, for they are the ones who are affect by the teacher's teaching style; therefore, they are able to provide positive feedbacks basing on what they have experienced. To illustrate, my former school had a good culture of providing some time for students to evaluate their teachers. this would always impact teachers positively because they would know what exactly they need to do so that their lesson can be well understood. it is therefore very good for teacher to be evaluated by students.
In addition, through evaluation students creates a good relationship with their teacher. it is only when a person shows you his or her concern about the making a positive impact in your life that you start admiring them. when requesting for feedbacks teachers are showing the students that they care about them. this encourage to work even harder not only to succeed but also to please their teacher who is also their friend.
Lastly, evaluation of teachers can lead to the increase in the students' performance. students' performance is highly affected by their teachers. Thus, when students get to tell the teacher what they think he or she can do to help them, it can be very fruitful. For instance, when our physics teacher in grade 12 asked for the feedbacks, we told him that he does not go in deep on a topic which created confusion in us. Afterward, he would always provided enough information on each topic, and our physics grades improved drastically. that being said teacher's evaluation is the key to students' success.
To sum up, students should evaluate their teachers because it will not only benefit the students themselse but also the teacher as it will allow teachers to improve their teaching style, will enhance the students-teacher relationship, and will maximize the students' performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20365535248 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84271260179 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498694516971 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3954424663 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.894736842 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19982376147 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08444574456 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537733215979 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135365474803 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137542317143 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.