Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

The high school as an academic center the main responsibility, of which is to prepare students for having both a successful professional and personal life. The high school form a fundamental part of a person's education. The experiences acquired at high school make students decide their path. The quality of education is essential for development of science and technology. Indeed, not until education gets improved can the society progress. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether wearing uniforms should be compulsory to high schools students or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that allows students to wear what they like can contribute to live autonomously.

One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that a vast majority of students in all around the world spend an important part of their time in school. Scientifically speaking, not only can seeing the same color damage eyesight but also can be boring for students. In fact, there is possibility that students may lose their incentive to keep on and increase dropout rate. Delving further into the issue reveals that students with different color will provide fertile ground for having a happy and nice atmosphere at school. Additionally, not until high school let students decide their path can they progress and higher productivity. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that crowds of students who wear cloth with different color at school are happier and motivate to enhance their knowledge and tertiary education.

Another reason that is equally important if not more is that students will learn how to be responsible and take charge in their life. Broadly speaking, high school in this way provides an opportunity for students to experience independent life. Actually, students will learn how to make a sound decision when they face trials and tribulations. Going into the depth, if high schools restrict students not only it will have negative consequences but also decrease the performance, hence, students will not be able to take responsibility. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, students with same uniform are more likely to concentrate on subject. In fact, researches have shown that different colors in classroom disturb students when teachers are teaching various materials. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.

To wrap it up, high schools should allow students decide what they are willing to wear at school. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that same uniform with same color can damage student's eyesight. In addition, different colors will provide fertile ground for having a happy atmosphere. Another thing is that not only will students learn how to make a sound decision but also how to live independently. I highly suggest that high schools should permit students decide their path in every single facet of their lives. If high schools do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness an increase in dropout rate.

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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'another thing', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237347294939 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.17277486911 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0942408376963 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0663176265271 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0366492146597 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104712041885 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0401396160558 0.0351676179071 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90139843653 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331588132635 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00174520069808 0.00188951952338 92% => OK
Determiners: 0.0767888307155 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0331588132635 0.0209618222197 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0244328097731 0.0139019557991 176% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3284.0 2387.08602151 138% => OK
No of words: 523.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27915869981 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4034416826 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311663479924 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223709369025 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12810707457 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90139843653 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491395793499 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 58.2208874636 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3703703704 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7998138346 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.62962963 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3703703704 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.481481481481 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 50.5367183627 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.38607594937 1.45489161554 95% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39496445949 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0620518136502 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0434910212878 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.420113781185 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0982981025734 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13744435994 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974969636643 0.0781384742642 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.467934064996 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0367561528645 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308027378467 0.210909579961 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525594408932 0.0618886996521 85% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK

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