Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion?

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Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion?

Television plays a significant role in our modern life. From my perspective, television has a positive impact on society. I feel this way for two main reasons that I’m about to discuss.

Firstly, television is a great source of education. lots of channels provide an enormous amount of information on different aspects like sociology, medicine, engineering, biology and so on. As an example, National Geographic and Discovery channel a lot of educational documentaries which are easy to understand.

Secondly, television can be a good source of entertainment. If you are at home alone or you cannot go outside for any reason, you can just turn on your television and enjoy a favorite show. this happened to me last Friday. Due to rainy weather, I didn’t feel to go outside and enjoyed one of my favorite show namely ‘The Supernatural.’

In summary, a television can be a good way for your education and entertainment depending on your demand. Using it in the right way can enlighten your way of life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11834319527 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29056866854 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6003825586 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113985060617 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445985728194 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444261920539 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672387722935 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248162246199 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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