Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilisation until our modern times, education played a vital role in each society. Individuals changed the world and made it better place by the help of education. Some people believe that going to the school and listening the teacher is not necessary. However, others think that attending to the classes is essential for proper education.From my vantage point, I am with former group and the line will shed light on my view point.
First significant reasons which deserves some word is about cost of studying. There are many student around us who have struggling with making decent living. Especially, if students live in a big city, they can not afford the cost of living, House rents are so high and dormitories is not a place to study lessons. They can work at a part time or full time job if university does not force to studuent to attend the classes. Earning their own money is to student's advantage. On the one hand they can cut their expenses, on the other hand they may stop to depending their families.
Secondly, in approaching this matter, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point. Due to the competition between the big companies, they aim to recruit new graduates which have work experiences. Students suffers from lack of practical knowledge since they learn only theory at university. If they make to attending classes optional, they can gain real life experiences and increase their management and organisational skills.
Finally, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one cannot deny that attending to the classes is useful but should not be necessary. Student can study by the help of online classes while they work at a job and earn money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: From
...asses is essential for proper education.From my vantage point, I am with former grou...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'students'?
Suggestion: students
... about cost of studying. There are many student around us who have struggling with maki...
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Suggestion: part-time
...e to study lessons. They can work at a part time or full time job if university does not...
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Suggestion: fulltime
...ssons. They can work at a part time or full time job if university does not force to stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95517241379 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67587317808 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1256687674 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20117269444 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586275757969 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581961875213 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119667879147 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500719973159 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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