Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
There is a long debate over, whether a university student is required to attend classes or they should be optional for them. In my opinion, it is better for university students that attending classes should be mandatory for them. This is because, students can focus on studies in a better way. Additionally, they will learned how to be more discipline in life.
Firstly, attending classes in the university help the students to focus better on their studies. In spite of this, if going to classes would be optional the students can not concentrate in their studies and can be distracted easily. However, in the classes student can focus on studies properly as. For instance, when I was in my graduation , our university students were required to have mandatory 80% attendence. Otherwise, they will not be allow to sit in the examination. After this rule, the students were more attentive in their studies and their was lot of improvement in the results of different courses. This would not have been possible if the university department had not made attending class as required. As a result, it is very beneficial by students to attend the classes.
In addition, students will learned discipline more in the classes. Attending classes daily in the university will teach students to be more active, punctual and time management. These things will help students later in their career. However, if students were never been attentive in the university class, they will not be able to learn these manners. To exemplify , one of my cousin university required to attend classes. He wakes up early morning, goes to university and after coming home he utilizes the remaining time in completing the tasks that was important. This is help him alot when he started his job after graduation. He is very successful software engineer and very much appreciated by his senior for being disciplined and organized. As a result, I strongly believe that university should make mandatory for students to attend classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: learn
... in a better way Additionally they will learned how to be more discipline in life Fi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'classes'' or 'class's', 'classis's'?
Suggestion: classes'; class's; classis's
...can be distracted easily However in the classes student can focus on studies properly a...
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...For instance when I was in my graduation our university students were required to...
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Message: Did you mean 'sitting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sitting
...ndence Otherwise they will not be allow to sit in the examination After this rule the...
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...l not be allow to sit in the examination After this rule the students were more a...
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Suggestion: addition,
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Suggestion: learn
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...able to learn these manners To exemplify one of my cousin university required to ...
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...ersity and after coming home he utilizes the remaining time in completing the tas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, as for, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92749244713 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68986367674 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422960725076 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 331.0 20.1344086022 1644% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1631.0 100.406767564 1624% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 331.0 20.6045352989 1606% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 5.45110844103 1963% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372567971269 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.372567971269 0.076458572812 487% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300992578571 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330657509967 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 167.3 11.7677419355 1422% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -264.49 58.1214874552 -455% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 132.4 10.1575268817 1303% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.73 8.01818996416 283% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.002688172 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 134.4 10.0537634409 1337% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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