Some people enjoy taking risks and trying new things. Others are not adventurous; they are cautious and prefer to avoid danger. Which behavior do you think is better?
Explain why.
No risk no gain and no gain without pain. I will choose to be a person who is willing to take a risk rather than not. We face lots of situations in our life full of risk however we have to make a decision. For example, according to research data arrange marriages are more successful than love marriages. If we fail that does not mean we should stop trying. We should learn from our failures and keep trying until we succeed. If there is a higher risk that means that gain will be higher too. For example in the stock market if the risk is bigger the outcome is bigger too.
Another reason, I am preparing for the TOEFL exam and I need to score 80 points in order to get admission to my dream college. The risk is I have only one month of time to prepare for the exam. On the contrary, this is my last attempt and I have no experience of giving the TOEFL exam in the past. So, there is a risk but if I practice hard, use the right strategy and work on my weakness then chances are higher I will improve and hit the goal. Also, there are lots of risks in businesses if a company wants to launch a product. What are the chances the product will be successful? However, if the company did the market research and on that basis created the product the acceptance rate of the product is high. There is no guarantee or any formula for success. Sometimes we have to take a risk and believe in ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re more successful than love marriages. If we fail that does not mean we should st...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lures and keep trying until we succeed. If there is a higher risk that means that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18518518519 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27560570932 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.720031575 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4705882353 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660146001093 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238176247747 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245379471683 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531163271722 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00871018148024 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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