In spite of the fact that early morning sleep is incredibly delightful, in my opinion, the people who prefer to get up early in the morning can entirely enjoy every moment of the day. There are several clear reasons to demonstrate why getting up early in the morning surpasses the former one. Better time management, nicer moods, and good impacts on health are the major reasons that I, personally, prefer getting up early.
time management:
These days, everybody believes that “time is money;” even I believe that time is worth more than money. One who gets up early in the morning can do his or her work on time and can use the best part of the day too. Most of the works begin early in the morning, and it brings opportunities to gain these wide ranges of jobs only for the people who can get up early every morning. A person who knows the value of the early rising can enjoy the advantages of it, like having plenty of practical time on a day. Early birds have a suitable time from 8 a.m. to 2 p.m. to perform their official work in the banks, governmental offices, and companies which are open only in the morning. A person who gets up late cannot perform these tasks on time, and even he or she should spend several days doing a simple errand because the offices will be closed when he or she has “got up”. Concerning this, there is a proverb that says, “The early bird catches the worm,” which tells us the importance of the time by getting up in the morning. Being early rising surely brings us an incredible discipline in life, which can help us to have time management and a daily program. On the other hand, other people who are not early birds cannot use their time in the same way and have quite a bit of wasted time. They get up late and probably go to bed late, but, during the time at which they are awake, they cannot perform any work because they missed the golden time, morning, of the day. In this regard, they waste their time because they are not able to do some of their work in the evening or at night.
Statistics demonstrate that early birds generally have better moods and are calmer than others. Scientifically, the best biological clock in humans offers a time of sleep between 10 p.m. and 6 a.m., which is 8 hours a day. Making adjustments based on the biological clock help us to be fresh when we get up in the morning. By doing so, a person can have a better mood and will behave kindly toward other people because on-time sleeping makes him or her calm and fresh all of the day. If one gets up late, for example at 12 o'clock, he or she probably feels sleepy and bored during the day. Early birds are healthier than others because they act based on their nature and biological clock. By so doing, they have enough time to exercise in the morning to keep their bodies fit. They breathe the fresh air of the morning in their lungs too.
In sum, there are many reasons to prove that getting up early in the morning is better than doing so late. Proper using of time and improving health are the major advantages of this habit. Early risers have a great deal of time to use, especially in the best time of the day, that is, in the morning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
... personally, prefer getting up early. time management: These days, everybody be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...leeping makes him or her calm and fresh all of the day. If one gets up late, for example a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... If one gets up late, for example at 12 oclock, he or she probably feels sleepy and bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 592.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42398648649 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27193308535 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435810810811 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 826.2 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.53221105 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.76 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.68 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343684175868 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111578945309 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748138419225 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240211542745 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682163108845 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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