Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the down of humanity, human beings have been struggled about an important issue of sleeping. Sleeping hours can affect the life quality and brings about either success or failure in life. In this regard, one of the contentious questions having been arisen is that whether be night owl or morning bird. Having been aware of my biological situation, I subscribe to the plan to wake up early in the morning to arrange my tasks. In what follows, I substantiate my viewpoint by explaining my reasons.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is about health consequences of getting up early in the morning or staying up late at night. Many scholars have been conducted numerous research about the physical and mental health relating to sleeping hours. The results of their experiments, indicate that if people wake up earlier and do not stay up late, they are more likely to be happy, ambitious and motivator. They are not only quiet optimistic about future plans, but also try to widespread their energy to other people surrounded them. On the other hand, stay-up-late people are more prone to mental diseases such as anomia and physical illnesses like heart attack. Thus, one should take into account this aspect of being morning bird and get up early in the morning.
The other reason that worth to mention is that during day hours, people are more likely to arrange their tasks and routine affairs rather than nighttime, when most companies and organizations are closed. For instance, once I had to gather some documents for establishing new company. I could not wake up early since I had to stay up late to prepare a report of my work. By the time I went to do my affairs, every organizations were off and my work was undone. The day later, I decided to wake up early to do my ongoing tasks. By the end of the work hours, I almost have done all my duties.
To put it briefly, contemplating all factors and reasons, one soon realizes that early riser people benefits from not only healthy mind and body, but also they take advantage of being done all their tasks and duties as soon as possible. In this vein, no one can claim that stay-up-late style would lead them to better life style.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70207253886 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51307755689 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546632124352 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8253901288 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5263157895 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246390726978 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080031634441 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716989131233 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139778797149 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745388711443 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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