Some people prefer to live in the countryside or in a small town. Others pefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Some people prefer to live in the countryside or in a small town. Others pefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Living in the countryside has some advantsges, such as clean environment and lack of traffic problems. However, I personally prefer to live in a big city. Th reasons why I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
One of the reasons is that in a big city such as Moscow, people have myriad of feasibilities to gain career growth. There are a lot of businesses in the big cities. Plus, the main offices of the majority of the bigest companies concentared there. Moreover, these offices have scores of the fillials there as well. If a person wants to advance through the ranks of a company in a fast pace, it is better to move to a the megapolis. Although people, who live in the contryside, are enable to progress in the career too, they need much more time to do this because most of the companies there are small and can not provide a lot of position available. To that end, big sities are more the best choice to live for the individuals who want to excel.
Another reason is that life in a big city is very dinamic. There is a variety of theaters, studiums and sport complexes in the big city. Everyone there can find an activity he likes. My own exparience illustrates it very well. As a student, I was living in Moscow, and my leasure was always very dence. Visiting tremendous amount of the entertainmant places helped me to stay busy all the time and enjoy life. If a person is very active and wants toobtain a lot of new friends, he needs to live in the big city. Despite on the opinion that in the contryside people can find things to do, mostly the life in there is not so astonishing and interesting as in the big city. So, life in the big city full of the fascinating moments.
To recapitulate, I feel that life in a big city is more advantageous. This is because people who live in the big city have a lot of jobs opportunities and involved in the myriad of marvelous activities. All things considered, a big city in the best place to live.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., a big city in the best place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40710382514 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67383615858 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478142076503 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7314324174 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3181818182 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25835890253 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782754767351 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804124332751 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178536675242 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585303991449 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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