Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
there are different preference for people to live according to their need. Some might prefer the city life others probably like to live in remote areas. In my opinion, I prefer to live in a big city. I feel this way for the following reasons. First, living in a city means you have more career opportunites. Additionally, cities have many educational institutions
To begin with, there are so many career opportunites in a big city which is more convinient for the job. To be more specific, after my gradaution in it engineering, I moved out from the small town of chicago to the down town area of chicago city. This is because, the downtown of chicago have different IT companies which offered great opportunities for my career. The office buildings are very near to the residential area which save my commute and keep me on time at my work place. THerefore, I choose to live in a big city.
In addition, big cities have so many educational instituions, mesuems and universities which help us to choose our career more easily. These instutions offer courses in vast amount that helps the student to highlight their interests. To exemplify, when my sister lived in the city she worked in the meuseum of natural history in New york city where she developed her interest in biology subject. As she started her college she knew that she wanted the biology as her major. This would not have been possible if she had lived in small town. As a consequnece, it is very beneficial to live in a big city.
In conclusion, it is very advantageous to live a city life than living in a small town. this is because, big cities have more job opportunitis and they have vast amout of learning centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66220735786 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73084244792 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.754772407 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4444444444 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334924478394 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127365682911 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108641411249 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22307741278 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108188185426 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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