Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
A myriad of factors can be responsible for whether some people spend most of their time alone or in a company of friends. Some people are very shy and do not like noisy companies. It prevents them from active communication. Conversely, other people are socially adept and they need to share their emotions and energy with others. Therefore, the latest prefer to hang out mostly with friends. I personally tend to spend most of my time alone. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, I feel quite comfortable when I am alone. The reason for that is that I am a very creative person. I like spending my leisure time not on the couch in front of TV, but in a process of making something with my hands. To be clear, I enjoy decorating my house. Moreover, a lot of the decorations I make by myself. For example, the last project I was working on, was a set of pictures crafted from pieces of wood, metal nails, and yarn. For me, it was a very unusual project because I have never done something like that before. I was so fascinated by the work and could not wait to finish it out. Although sometimes I feel demand in personal communication with friends, I always keep myself busy and can easily spend weeks without the connection. To that end, the creative nature of mine makes me never feel bored even when nobody is around.
Secondly, recently I spend a lot of time alone since I do not have many friends here, in the United States. I moved to the U.S. three years ago and did not meet someone, who could become a close friend of mine. Some people are able to make friends very easily, unfortunately, I am not this kind of person. It takes a long time for me to feel comfortable around new people to start sharing my thoughts and emotions. In other words, I am a pretty introverted person. Plus, the language barrier and the cultural difference sometimes prevent me from socializing in the new environment. For instance, when I just got my first job in the Unites States, I could not build a friendship with my colleagues because I simply did not understand what they were saying or jokes they made. Even today, when my English has improved dramatically, sometimes, it is still difficult for me to comprehend the informal speech of the native speakers. So, the absence of close friends makes me be alone most of the time.
To conclude, I am one of the people who spend most of their time alone. This is because I have always had something to do and have never got bored and because at the place I am living now, I do not have friends to share free time with
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... feel bored even when nobody is around. Secondly, recently I spend a lot of time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41596638655 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53320578685 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489495798319 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8001384471 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0714285714 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339172300019 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922716642717 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996946413686 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244281560443 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111190660263 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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