Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern innovations and technologies such as laptops, smartphones, the internet, etc. all has integral impacts on human life and the style of living. Nowadays, some people believe that computers have enormous benefits for humankind while, others suggest that disadvantages of new technologies are more than their advantages. In my view, distinguishing between this two notion isn't logical because there is an opaque boundary among them. However, I will clarify some reasons to reveal inconvenience of harmful effects of computers.
First and foremost, are you from a generation that was growing with cellphones or you were in touch with old types of computers at the time of childhood? Both groups experienced big changes in the speed rate of the time during last decades. Consequently, the pace of the actions for each individual has enormously increased recently. Thus, most of the people who are in touch with novel technologies suffer from high tension and fewer comfort zones. To explain more about the concept I will bring an appropriate example of my life, when I was a child most of the people were happier and used to have more leisure time. In these days, most parts of the society lacks a perfect moment of relaxation. I thought about this matter and always the answer is change in the speed of events in life.
Secondly, some people prefer to carry their laptop or phone all day and night because of being available all the time. there is no doubt that everyone expects you give answer to you phone number of email as soon as possible. Therefore, most of the time you are in hurry to give responses at suitable time. For instance, I was worried about being late to give an answer to my new GF messages on WhatsApp. On the other hand, she asked me to be reachable all of the time. I suppose this behavior made bad effects on the relationship. Chronically I spent time to my phone and it was annoying.
To sum up, when it comes to preference between using or ignoring new technologies I stand on less time spending to them because of the aforementioned arguments in the essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
... distinguishing between this two notion isnt logical because there is an opaque boun...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ecause of being available all the time. there is no doubt that everyone expects you g...
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Suggestion: all the
...ther hand, she asked me to be reachable all of the time. I suppose this behavior made bad ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i suppose, no doubt, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.743948167 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2688226994 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17010842991 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439241096353 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605728383169 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938562121088 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589192115515 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.