. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
In today's progressive world we live in, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of technology and the internet. When it comes to whether the internet cause issues or provides us with valuable knowledge, there are different ideas. Some people believe that so many problems stem from the internet, but others believe that the internet has a pivotal role in enhancing our information. From my vantage point, the last group carries more weight. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, by surfing the internet, learning becomes convenient and time-efficient. It is not necessary to go to the library or buy expensive books to find information. The only thing you need is to Googling and enjoy the most relevant knowledge provided by the internet. There are a lot of courses on youtube, which make you self-sufficient in the learning process. Once, I need to learning programming; However, since I lived in a small city, I couldn't find any knowledgeable teacher in this field. When I was frustrated, one of my friends introduced to me some databases and useful websites abundant in the best programming education videos uploaded by the best teachers in the world.
Second, the internet provides us many platforms to communicate with knowledgeable people with common interests worldwide. To put it in a vivid picture, many people share their knowledge on their Instagram page. Following such pages, let you gather a lot of information about every subject up to your interests; the latest technology, Fashion, political information, scientific, to name a few. Not only could you follow them, but also you could ask them every question and find so many people who share the same interests as you.
Third, the internet allows access to information economically. Once just available in the expensive books, information today is accessible almost free and even more updated. Books and newspapers are costly and also take place. However, the electronic version of many books available on the internet is cheaper and compatible with the lower economic classes. Therefore, using the internet make it affordable for everyone to enhance their knowledge, even if they couldn't purchase high-priced books.
By considering the reasons above-mentioned, I firmly believe that the internet equips people with tremendous information. Because of the advance of the internet, learning has become convenient, time and money-efficient. As well, it gives the chance to communicate with a lot of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...rning process. Once, I need to learning programming; However, since I lived in a small city...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...wever, since I lived in a small city, I couldnt find any knowledgeable teacher in this ...
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Line 4, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...o enhance their knowledge, even if they couldnt purchase high-priced books. By cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25373134328 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04882993559 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8480248808 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8260869565 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4782608696 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306708917475 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764044202646 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670034071975 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158549392728 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439532762002 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.