Some people say that Money makes tha world go round, others say that money is the root of all evil. Which of these do you agree with? Use examples and details in your answer.

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Some people say that Money makes tha world go round, others say that money is the root of all evil. Which of these do you agree with? Use examples and details in your answer.

Before and today, at all times, it was difficult to survive and live satisfactory life without money. Personally, I think that money make the world go round. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
One of the reasons is that money facilitate to progress. It is in humans` nature to compeet with each other in order to gain self confidence and become meaningful for themselvs and for public. In the most caces, the person who has more money is considered more successful and reccognized by others. Therefore, this pushes people to make money to excel. If the person is willing to be conspisuous in the society, he is trying to elaborate or invent something new and unusual. This is turn, contributes to the world`s progress and development. Despife of opinion that money is the reason of myriades of conflicts, they make people to think wider and craft new inventions. To that end, money is indispensable force of humans` intellectual evolution.
Another reason is that desire to enjoy life by humans make them work and earn money. Different people have different interrests in life. Someone, for instatnce, likes diving and if he lives somewhere in the north states of the United States, he has to fly to warmer states to dive into the ocean. Others, for example, like to travel all around the world, which is very problematically to fullful without expenses. This kind of activities are quite costly and request having a job and making money. Although some of the hobby people have could be done without spendings, most of them are not cheep. So, to live fully enjoyable life people tend to work and earn money, but then spend what the have been made on their favorite activities, this way, making the round.
To sum it up, I feel that money ratate the world. This is because they contribute to the evolution of the humans` minds and are necessary to make enjoyable for people thingh hapenning. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that money are crucial element of humans` life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...having a job and making money. Although some of the hobby people have could be done without...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8612716763 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73363351241 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546242774566 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4314658047 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232713117378 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794468503782 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612192096441 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157543548578 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188980786572 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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