Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer?
People move to different location during their live because of different reasons like finding better jobs, visit new cities or even be close to their kin. In my point of view, traveling to find the most suitable place is better than living stable. This essay will support my idea by providing some reasons and proposing merits of moving in following paragraphs.
First of all, people need to visit others and know about different cultures and traditions by moving to variety places. One of the most significant merit of migrating is knowing about people’s precipitation about life and their knowledge about their world will increase. Also people will find some valuable experiences during their journey which can lead them to make the best decision in harsh situations. People who moved to different cities or even country are more sociable and have better communication with others, in contrast to people who stay in one place and live there throughout their life.
Furthermore, people will enjoy from visiting new nature and climate, if they travel and live in various places. Some people move to other cities because of their issues such as health, financial, mental problem etc. So have to migrate in order to solve these problems. For instance, seventeen years ago we moved to Tehran (capital of Iran) from Rasht. My father was fired and as he was looking for job we forced to move Tehran in order to found job there. Since there were more job opportunity for him. In addition we could access to school with higher quality. According to the new research which done by Iran migrate organization (IMO), 35 percent of move from city to city is because of finding job and 85 percent of moving from villages to cities is because of access to proper facilities.
In conclusion, I prefer to move various place to find proper one. Some reasons were mentioned above support this believes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...the most significant merit of migrating is knowing about people's precipitation about...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the most significant merit of migrating is knowing about people's precipitation about...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...wledge about their world will increase. Also people will find some valuable experien...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...e were more job opportunity for him. In addition we could access to school with higher q...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92789968652 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48000623218 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542319749216 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9935635996 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329866380778 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987778176557 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654995774399 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194775154715 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469110105117 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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