Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
My parents spend their entire lives in one place but I prefer to travel to different places throughout my life. There are several reasons which support my opinion and strengthen my idea to move to various places looking for a better job, house, community or even climate.
First, the job opportunities are not equally distributed all over the world. To get something better then present is important for self enhancement. For instance, in my community the job opportunities are minimal so most of the students seek foreign countries for education and jobs. I had completed my studies from India and then moved to the USA for a job and now I am preparing for Canada for research work.
Second, travelling gives us a lot of acknowledging knowledge. There is so much to learn in the world and for it we have to move from one place to another. Such as I visited two places and both of them have vast differences in culture, climate and living style. It was a wonderful experience to acquire knowledge about countries' uniqueness and this is one of the reasons I choose to move to a new place as mentioned above.
Third, spending my whole life in a similar atmosphere and routine is very cliche for me. My parents did so and they like their life as monotonous and conservative. By moving to a new place I can explore new places and climatic changes. In India there are three weathers but in the USA there are only two weather changes, these differences make me curious and enthusiastic.
Finally, on the basis of above mentioned reasons we can say that moving to different places makes some people alive and energetic. Today's generation never likes to stay at a point and move ahead to learn new things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...ed all over the world. To get something better then present is important for self enhanceme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, then, third, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70957971321 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4182968189 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395808523675 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119297772605 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980980963404 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217852384871 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106133020065 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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