Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples.
It is free for people to decide how to spend their own money. Some people think it is better to spend their money as soon as possible. However, other think it is better to save their money for future. Personally, I prefer to save the money for some time in the future. There are two reasons which I will explore more in the following essay.
To begin with, life is full with unexpected emergencies which can consumed lots of money. If there is amount of money that have been saved at the past, the emergencies could be quickly addresses. Take myself as an example, five years ago, I was a college student who just get her motorcycle license. I was so excited to ride the scooter to wherever I want. I wasn’t familiar with the traffic and roads and I just hit by a truck. I broke my leg and was sent into the hospital. The surgery needs lots of money and the medical cost is even higher. Fortunately, I had saved money when I start working as a teacher assistant. I paid money to get my feet back to normal and bought a new scooter.
Secondly, saving money could improve family relation. Parent are always worry about their children having no money to take care of themselves which might put lots of pressure on children. For example, my brother saved lots of money from work. My mother doesn’t worry about him whether he could afford his living. When he come home during his work break, he always treats us a big meal or buying me the expensive video games that I want so much. However, if my brother didn’t save money, I think my parent will be very anxiety and worried about him. He might be blamed from my parent about keep spending his money and not thinking about the future, or even worst, the relationship between my parent and my brother might debacle. The vibe of my family could be serious awkward.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that saving money for some time in the future could have more benefits. I feel this way is because we could have the preparation of the unexpected accident which need lots of money to deal with and improve the relations between family and ease the anxiety from parent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ic and roads and I just hit by a truck. I broke my leg and was sent into the hosp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50387596899 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31518203125 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521963824289 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3467367871 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.625 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251401042359 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932962374427 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106288497348 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194452064825 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14858959897 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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