Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Poor people are around the world in spite of the wealth of the countries. In this context, some human beings are on the streets asking for money to eat, that's people are the famous call it "beggars." I strongly believe that is an act of humanity to help these people with some coins or paper bills for two reasons. First is because beggars are people how have extremely neediness and good faith people can help them with money to eat or search someplace for sleeping. Second, if we do not support them, is probably to this people can die of starvation in the middle of the street.
First and foremost, our parents always teach us the value of help others at any moment. So, the act of help beggars with money is one of this crucial moment in which can help others and make an impact on the world. For instance, two weeks ago I helped an elder man who was near to my house, I give him some food (fruit, milk, toast, bread, and so on) and some money. It was gratefully because the man told me: thank so much, and Good always blessed you. In this sense, we can help needed people with little, but we can create a significant change in the life of these people.
Another essential point to consider is the importance to give money to beggars is that we can increase the time of life of these people. In other words, the act of giving them money provide them with the opportunity live more and not die in the middle of the street for malnutrition of some diseases. For example, some years ago I saw on television the history of beggars who died because of she did not find food to eat, and nobody people help her at that moment. In this way, I believe that is humanity to give an amount of money and provide them the opportunity to change their day or life.
In sum, I am of the conviction that helps others always is the best way to make a positive impact on the world. Finally, I would recommend to all the people must assist beggars with a little contribution, and at the whole, we can provide them with some opportunities to live better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36292428198 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38078016069 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469973890339 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.018831757 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235873433482 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859037576776 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497988645957 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151954164589 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616648712786 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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