Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Everyone has their own share of problems. Begging is a huge concern specially in the developing world. A single person can not solve it. I definitely think that no likes to beg but circumstances make them bigger. If a small help in the form of money could offer them happiness or fee them eat for a few days then I would prefer to help them no matter what other people will say or the society.
To begin with, I believe that I can not change the life of a beggar or I don't have time to watch it how he is spending that money but I want my heart to feel "god" by donating a bit. It's my choice to give or not but I believe in " good karma" at least now. Earlier, I used to believe that we should never give cash to beggars but one of an incident that happened a couple of months ago has changed my mind completely. Last year around in November I was shopping in a dollar tree and when I came outside one of the little guys asked me money and I didn't give him. But after coming from shops I could not sleep. My mind was so disturbed by imagining that what if that little boy really needs it. We never know what is the situation of a beggar now or how hungry he is or how needy he is. The next, day I went to see that guy. he was not there. I feel regret every time when I think about this situation. Then I decided that I will give a small amount of help to people who need it at least this much I can do.
Additionally, It's human nature to judge others for example why we don't give money to beggars because think that it's wrong, he will misuse it. Nevertheless, as far I know sometimes wrong is plain wrong and sometimes it's relative. It might possible that if the beggar will not get money, he can be a thief or he can do crimes just to get money so it is better to give some.
In conclusion, here I would like to convey that because of good karma and to stop the crimes we should give a little money to beggars. This way we can make our hearts feel good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06361323155 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27324034683 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506361323155 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6330446983 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0476190476 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215901578861 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507012688365 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578572014366 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128077619814 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776181131917 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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