There are different opinions on beggars. Some people think that people should help beggars by giving money. Other people, however, argue that helping with money is not the correct way to support them. I, myself, agree with the latter as they need support other than money. I feel this way for three reasons, which will explore in the following essay.
First of all, free money makes beggars more unemployed. If people continuously providing money to them, they become lazy to do work and continue to beg throughout their life. Because of this, they lose their life and also suffer their family along with them. As a consequence, beggars forget to do their own work for their life.
Second, other reason is that it affects children more than adults. People show sympathy towards children and provide money which makes them uneducated. For instance, adult beggar thinks that children's sympathy can lead to making more money. So they stop children's school education and send them for begging on the streets.
At last, many people give money to beggars, even though they earn less money. Although people are good-hearted, but they should also think about their family and children who survive because of them. They should save money for their children's education and future plan, instead of donating to beggars.
To sum up, for these three reasons, I strongly believe that giving money to beggars is not the correct way to do.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97071129707 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22016111727 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1746731263 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8823529412 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0588235294 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307828726988 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112952632702 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872519088646 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193080473385 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052379784797 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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